Guilty Of Chryme
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This was feedback posted for Solitude
IP:
v/ solitude..
a much better, cleaner verse. some ight punches also. the opener was the better one tho. even tho i used a line like this in the punchline league couple days ago.
not enuff post to vote, ill leave this as feed
Vip- i think you lacked punches in this, they just werent strong enuff. try to think up better concepts and keep your verse clean without stretchin ya lines. word.
return the favor- me vs. elite
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