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Old 10-22-05, 12:08 AM   #10
Achilles
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Voted For: Malicious.

E.C
man quit hypin ya self up, its not good, he can't even see though,
yeh... if only ya skills were as big as ya ego,
just aight, quote didnt help much 5-10
this is a missmatch, your not on my level, am storming ahead,
while my verses have humour in em, yours just be boring instead,
played on his verses 5-10
throw ya sieze/c's up, i dun give a fuck, ill have ya scared bitch,
gimmi the signs, n ill cut off the same finger u use to swear with,
this was nice, old concept tho 5.5-10
you finish collectin ya bones? well this wildfires has lost his flame,
now ill maliciously attack this fool, without cloning one off his names,*
best line so far 7-10
u never set the mark, you drop wack as usual, there's nothing notable,
and yet you still win the battles..... even with no quotables,
eh that was coo not that hard 6-10
here we go again, the big head comes out, well im groping you bitch
you need to quit hoping you'll win.
closer=blahhhh 4-10

u used some quotes even tho they didnt help out ya verse that much but overall u did well, nothin outstandin, u dont use much wordplay but u attempted personals which is always good...


Malicious.
Watch me rip this Easily Cowarded Mc, like it was nothin but 'Ez'..
As i make his white skin turn Ebony Colored like a skin disease.
kinda tight 6-10
Having Entered this battle Callout was your biggest mistake.
Cus im makin Every Challenger look like ali, when they shiver and shake
if u worded this better it woulda been tight as hell 5-10
Malicious is Ending your Career, Quiccer then a one hit wonder.
So no wonder they call you Earth Core , Cus you six feed under..!
aha nice lil concept 7-10
You an Unknown Kid,...so why you think your a known user?
Repping LL...smf,there aint no legend, you just a Livin Loser..!
lol good laugh 6-10
Your accomplishment? Best audio battle huh? Well i think your just overrated.
Cus soon as this battles over Ill ...
have your body ina Urn and say i killed you ,so you and your avy can be related.!
too long but 2nd line was nice 6-10
Last battle you ducked me,... Now Everyone in rv can C
Cus you couldnt catch the critics attention even if you had E.C* in your C.D!
lmaooo that made me laugh, nice close 8-10


feelin tha humor in this piece, u used some personals on him they connected, some of ya lines were a lil stretched but overall ya verse appealed much more

vote:malicious

rtf
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