A Life Of Chryme
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Voted For: Illist
Withersman-Nice verse man ill give that to you...you had some good attempt at wordplay...and good punches/personals.....they werent that hard hitting and effective but still present....your structure was good, i got good flow off of it....overall 5/10
Illist-Your verse was dope...i like how you structure it...sounds so much better wehn i read it...you had some dope wordplayy to begin your verse and dope at the end...inbetween you added some dope punches and wordplay...not the best/effective but again still appealing...you got this easy overall. 6/10
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rtf in sig yo
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A LIFE OF CHRYME
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