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Voted For: Mystic Chaos
para-your verse was short but sweet, you had nice vocab and flow...i like how you used a hook for your verse pretty dope...but i think you lacked a good idea...for it...i kinda expected this to happen on the real....up on emotion and imagery man ......6.5/10
mystic-your verse was sectioned good...i like your vocabulary and storyline...i didnt expect this and you kept me reading and the suspense was good...you had excellen imagery and good emotion...i think you got this through out a powerfull finish...7.5/10
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