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Voted For: Chief
achilles-your verse was iight, you had some good attempts at wordplays and punches, i think you had some corny asss lines yo you gotta come more creative and take time and do good your personals where there but lacking in overall skill. overall 6/10
chief-your verse was good, your structure through me off a bit but other than that you had some good punches...your personals were thoughrully explained....but thats annoying....try to word it better so you dont have to explain them....your verse was by far overall 7/10
v/chief
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