Voted For: Withersman

ILLest
this is the first I've ever read one of your text verses and I'd say you have potential at first. I think like most of your lines were spelt wierd and seemed forced kinda, I can't explain it but it just feels like it. your flow could use a bit of work and so could your punchlines you don't run up the personals much either try n twist words more man, play wit the definitions of words.

Withers
I liked your 6 lines a bit better they were a lil streched but the flow was there in a way. stucutre was cool but what I most noticed abbout yours was that you had better punchlines and creativty in your verse. the fact that you twisted shit more was dope you should went a bit longer though man. overall dope..

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