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Voted For: Paranoid
Para... Your imagery ad emotion was really good... And let me say right now if there is any spelling errors in this vote its cause my N and B buttons dont work well... Emotion was strong for the most part... you stayed on topic and i liked the approach you took with this... Imagery was smoth and deep... liked it alot...
9/10
Mistic Chaos... first off didt like the centering you did with your verse... the imagery was decint you stuck to the topic pretty well ad i enjoyed the approach you took to the subject... emotion could have been better along with the vocab... upp that and you will be better
8/10
V/ Para
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