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Old 10-22-05, 04:52 PM   #8
HiPnoTiK
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

wow this was a very dope battle from the both of you.

Mentalz-You had an extremly dope piece, you had nice concept to the topic and good vocab..your emotion was ok not the best ive read in a topical battle...n your imagery was good...you had some good wording.Your creativity was sorta expected for the topic...not much to come wit in my head so good job. 7.5/10

mystic-your verse was unforgettable man, every piece i read from you is dope. You had good vocabulary. your conccept taking on this was creative...didnt see this coming one bit which is what i liked. i was able to keep reading wanting more. your imagery was eccentric lol it was really intact..and your emotion was felt man...well done

v/mystic

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