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Old 10-22-05, 05:02 PM   #14
Districk
Flyweight
 
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From: between a girl's legs
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Voted For: Achilles

Sheif
1st bar-Stretched the fuck out.So many unnecessary shit in there.Punch was weak.
2nd bar-The 1st line with the Cd 'n shit is played out.And the lego thing was decent.
3rd bar-1st line was direct filler.And 2nd line,you saud "gettin a home"?..I'm sorry,but that is weird.If that's you trying to say that he's poor..it didn't work.There are normal people who can't buy a home and it's not because of them being poor.BUT,the concept with sherlock holmes/homes could have worked..if you had worded it better.
4th bar-WOW,this was stretched out.Flow was horrible.Punch,again,could have worked with better wording.


Achilles
1st bar-Forced wordplay.Sheet sound absolutely nothing like sheif.
2nd bar-AAh...decent punch.Nothing spectacular.
3rd bar-Weak...didn't really make much sense neither
4th bar-Good personal...try not to put links in battles anymore..but ok..


Ok...I gotta go withachilles in this battle.He was direct and straight to the point with his verse.Sheif tried waay to hard in this battle.

Vote-Achilles