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Old 10-22-05, 09:55 PM   #25
Willa
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

mystic chaos-your verse was very intellectual, you had good vocab and good imagery, with ya imagery i could picture it and it was suspensefull throughout ur verse...your emotion was felt a lot....i like how you had a creative verse that wasnt really expected...your last 2 lines were kinda weak..but other thanthat......8.5/10

paranoid-your verse had the potential to be dope...you had a good hook going for you....i just dont think you went into depth with your verse as you should have...you had good vocab...and seemed like you had intentions to do good. overall 7/10

v/mystic chaos.
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