beat is dope cant really make out what that perosn is saying but thats what you got to do for samples so dope

1st verse= flow is nice, i like how its got dope flow, word, rhyme shceme is dope but your lyrics are kinda wack in some parts, and i cant believe i can understand you yo, LOL but yea your lyrics need to be worked on and your back ground vioces are kinda sorry, dont like how you answer your questions,lol

2nd verse

woah you really ripped this shit, LOL wow kinda nice for me barely being able to understand you, LOL i like the flow its nice it fits beat perfect you could have had better presence like more harder like own the mic, exspecially since oyu spit with that type of flow...

can you Rtf the favor on the link i will up date this thread with

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