wow......
i really enjoyed reading this,very emotional, vivid imagery, easy, understandable vocabulary. props on this, my favourite bit was how u ended it,
My dreams still yearn for a respect a son deserves to earn
But the fact of reality is that you never will change
Signed,
Your Son (or as you see it "Just another name")
but my favourite lines throughout the piece were
Unless you cant remember how you bruised my body and faith
Spread feces on my face, Fly paper on my head
Lit a lighter to my toes and hit me while I was in bed
(especially the bolded line)
so yeah, well done, keep droppin and RTF plz if u can.