I aint judging you piece ! and from what I can see the other person who voted
on this battle said practicly the same thing.

I thought this was a topical battle ? Spoken Word is more poetry ? if this was
a Open Mic then maybe I would have looked at your verse in a different light
but your verse wasn't a topical and I'm sure most people will agree. So if I was
to judge this verse as a topical i'm sorry but it's not very good.