Voted For: Satans Spawn

Go Fist To Fist Lets Toss-The-Tools-Quick Get Flossed-Wit-Two-Clips //
Like "Old Men" U Tryin To Come Off Hard But Uz Soft-As-Stools-Bitch //
2..punch is played to shit and the 1st line is just pointless multis.
I Was Told-Ya-Wack So Dawg I Been Holdin-Back Bustin Flowz-An-Caps //
Get Scold-An-Smacked Comic Books Man? Aint You A Lil Old-For-That //
4....decent punch,but 1st line wuz filler.
Like A Retarded Dentist U Just Tryin-To-Floss U Get Tagged-Witta-Loss //
Down Right Blasphomous When Satans Spawn Gets His Back-On-Cross //
1...this wuzn't a punch...doesn't diss.

Im Spittin Off Quick .......Rippin The Tip Of Yo Head From Yo Body
Slash Dont Punch.. He Got More Kickz That White Women In Karate
4...ok..
Ill expose Yo Wack Ass Rymes And Make Yo Lyrics "Nude To RV"
And You Know Me & Yo Girl Been Knockin More "Hills" Than "Dorathy"
5...decent..
My Words Speak Louder Than My Action So Im Makin Sure You Hear Me
Im Puttin So Many Wholes In You Niggas Swearin You a Transpearacy
3...not feelin it,seemed to be more of a threat.

Ok..Satan Spawn got this..
Slash...
I think your rhyme scheme is fucking you up.Your puttin too much multis in one bar(2 lines).Look at ur 2nd bar..6 multis..3 sllyables each?..NO.And some of ur lines were played..like the old men one.The comic book line could have been decent.But...you didn't use it right..

Vote-Satans Spawn
Drop a vote in the link below....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211896