Voted For: one mic

one mic is dyslexic, he could put my verse up to a mirror and still not read my lyrics/
this kid is like a deaf cancer patient, hes just dying to hear it/
2....poor rhyming..zero flow..weak punch
you not ready, i suggest you take it from step one/
you couldnt make "a-cut" even if you were edward sissor hands step son/
3...weak,horrible concept.
one put his verse on the heater just to get his "mic-hot"/
i garrentee i will sweep this battle just like the chicago white sox/
4...1st line is played..2nd is blah
dawg im hurt you, you couldnt win this battle if text rappin was your virtue/
to much filler to search thru, this gonna be worst then when "john c." murked you/
5...decent.
you could stay on point but your raps will never be personal/
i will turn you inside out like body was reversible/
1...no,this was a threat...not a punch.
i dont know why you you try, we can see your nothing/
one mic raps like he's attached to a "e-z button"/
3...weak..set-up needs relevance.
im going to stop now so you can save your dignity/
its like im your school bully the way i take this victory/
3...weak..self glorifing.

yo yo, im hot on the mic, you's a newb, yer you hurd it
you picked that avatar, cuz your mind is deranged from my cursin'
4...rippin on avys is kinda blah now,but a personal is a personal..
when it comes to spittin dope lines, man, you really bore me
you diggin yourself into a hole, but this aint a fictional story*
3...wack
your unequipped for battlin you aint ready for action
you gon' learn your skills from me like i was Samuel Jackson*
4...ok,but try not to explain ur punches..
lyrically rampant, keepin my game tite
how you gonna succeed in rap, when you cant even spell ya name right!*
6....good punch.

Ok..Micsachek went more lines..but,it's quality over quantity.
And one mic got it.
Micsachek had played shit..like the mic-hot line and edward scissor hands.Also..shorten ur lines up cus ya flow is awful.It picked up near the end..but at the begining..it wuz horrid.

Vote-One Mic
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