Voted For: Drama Queen

Drama Queen-Ok...good peice overall.Stayed on topic from start to finish..didn't notice any filler or irrelevant lines.Flow wuz ok...nothing spectacular..but ok,becuz of the basic rhyme scheme and all.But the content was good.Complexity and everything wuz on point.Tho the whole death thingy is gettin a little bland in topicals.It's being used a lot.

Dilifence-The concept you used was more creative than Drama Queen's.Only problem wuz that i felt you forced ya flow and put big ass words that didn't tie to the topic.And that kinda made it more boring of a text read to be honest.

Vote-Drama Queen
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