Excellent poem right here, very emotional concept first of all.

You worked it out nicely, inserted a lot of truly poetic techniques in it. I love how you pose those rhetoric questions as "why" and such. Because there is no answer to them yet it's the human thing to do, to ask them. I can't really pick favorite lines because every line added to the overall beauty of this piece. Emotional vibe, making the readers involved in the story. Good use of images, good use of vocabulary as well.

Nice shit

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