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Old 10-23-05, 02:51 PM   #7
Buck.Marley
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Voted For: Satans Spawn

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=211555
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RTF Or vote will be removed

Stanza:
Im Spittin Off Quick .......Rippin The Tip Of Yo Head From Yo Body
Slash Dont Punch.. He Got More Kickz That White Women In Karate
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nah wasnt feelin it.

Ill expose Yo Wack Ass Rymes And Make Yo Lyrics "Nude To RV"
And You Know Me & Yo Girl Been Knockin More "Hills" Than "Dorathy"
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that was aight I guess.

My Words Speak Louder Than My Action So Im Makin Sure You Hear Me
Im Puttin So Many Wholes In You Niggas Swearin You a Transpearacy
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your best bar

weak verse,. but you ez got the win, expected better from you stanza.


slash:
Go Fist To Fist Lets Toss-The-Tools-Quick Get Flossed-Wit-Two-Clips //
Like "Old Men" U Tryin To Come Off Hard But Uz Soft-As-Stools-Bitch //
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nice multies, 2nd line made me laugh a little..

I Was Told-Ya-Wack So Dawg I Been Holdin-Back Bustin Flowz-An-Caps //
Get Scold-An-Smacked Comic Books Man? Aint You A Lil Old-For-That //
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nah, wasnt feelin it, could of used the concept better than you did.

Like A Retarded Dentist U Just Tryin-To-Floss U Get Tagged-Witta-Loss //
Down Right Blasphomous When Satans Spawn Gets His Back-On-Cross //
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dope julties, weak punch

stanza gets the win, but barely.
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