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Old 10-23-05, 03:55 PM   #25
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Voted For: Natural killa

Natural killa

this shit's a mismatch..i ain't even tryin and lotty's still strugglin to hit back
& he said he's gonna recycle....
........so I already know he's gonna spit whack....
^cool opener, good using what he said against him 6/10

It's best he quites rap..cos his style being best dressed is still blank
And hell...EVEN HE knows..that against me..he's left wit no "RANKS"
^okay okay, I see the point...cool...6/10

And if I was a bitch like him......i'd be doing anything to stay outta sight
cos Lotty described his "clit"......just to be able to say that he's "tight"
^lmao, shit made me laugh, good wordplay formed into hardhitting punch 9/10

ur own crew are the ones that get you blowed from ya head to shoes
reason you a "G" is cos Marv "J" already showed that he's ahead of you*
^haha, good personal, formed it quite nice in fact 8/10[/b]

in this thread,you lose..I'm the one that loves to screech 'n trouble you
only reason Lotty "End-V" so much is cause he never reach the W (envy)
^aight bar, nothing too special but still decent shit though 6/10

I could sit here all day,harssin him and just break his verses apart for miles
cos Lotty the head of whackness...just look.........................he started E-style
[b]^lmao, nice closer, finished em off 7/10

Total: 42/60 = 70%, overall solid battle, good punches with personal touch to them. Good
vocab as well, flow was on point...good shit...


Pop Lotty

Are you stupid, you really don't want beef with the great
I ain't seen a Killa this crazy since Norman Bates
^good wordplay in last line, first is bleh 5/10

I'll fuck you up with these lines, then fuck ya family hoe
So when I date ya mom...it won't be a MTV show
^good shit, liked it...7/10

Dude on my dick, I mean, is it a habit?
Mad cuz he called Lotty out...
...and Lotty called him a fucking faggot.
^uhm not really feeling it actually 4/10

Ain't want u in E-Style, that's ya best accomplishment to date
MY greatest was getting you kicked out the next day
^nice bar right here, chuckled at it...8/10

You's a fucking joke bitch, don't know where you got name son
But if you a Natural Killa, I'm wonder who the fuck u inheriting from
^good closer as well, 8/10

Total: 32/50 = 64%, I feel you didn't try that much actually, it showed in your bars. Picked
it up a little towards the end but it lacked consistency actually. What you did do right was
quite solid in fact.


Vote: Natural Killa
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