beat is appropriate for this type of introspective/reflective track
ur vocals cud be amped a couple decibels
ur flow is on beat...Im jus not sure I like ur rhyme scheme here
and in a couple spots, you forced your bars with too many words
deep lyrics...and I'm familiar with some of them...
flow picked up toward the end of the track...good
and Tupac's Keep ya head up kept popping in my mind...that chorus just invokes his...for better or worse...I dunno...not bad though
pretty decent track
almost a 7/10
just needs polish
deep though