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Old 10-23-05, 06:13 PM   #40
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Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

Daubs
You use a normal style of punches, really basic style. I didn't even see much personals in there. the flow was cool but really you need to hit harder wit personls man, get at em harder, twist words more. some of your lines were alright but just not feelin em like you tried hard or anything, you should try harder man.

Kon
yours aint much better I used to read your shit and be like damn but you kinda seem weaker now lol, but I still think you got this, not much personals used in your verse either but I still feel you used his name more instead of being self glorified so much, and you even twisted words in a complex way. overall I think you got it Kon

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