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Old 10-23-05, 06:22 PM   #9
Paranoid
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Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

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You used to do crazy shit but comin from this was a key it's alright. I thought you didn't use the same concept through out the verse, you had complex punches some were kinda meh. I was hopin for more personals maybe, try doin that shit you used to do man. but fa real I think you had a tad more of better punches not by far but I know you can really kill bars sometimes.

Kon
I think that you did pretty good here, but you swear a little to much in your disses. you had a real nice closer haha if you woulda used more lines like that then possibly you woulda grabbed my vote. but overall I think you did pretty good but you had to much of swears, try workin wit personals more as well if you can.
just hittin it honest yall

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