Chorus]
the chorus is accually good the voice suites the beat well. the flow is nice. I aint feelin your voice though. but that don't matter. the lyrics is dope. Were you thinkin of tupac when you made this song? anyways overall i give the chorus 6/10
[1st Verse]
Well here we go. Your voice fits the beat well. I don't like the slur you got though. But anywayz. you didn't ride the beat to nicely it was decent but it could be better. Your emotion was alright. not too good. but you'lll get better. now here's where i think you went wrong. i really don't think what your talking about is true. talking about mom being a crackfeind and your boy locked in the pen i really don't think that true. but never know. the lyrics were alright. some shit was stretched but other than that i give this a 6/10[/b]
Beat
the beat is nice. i like the melody and the piano on this. its a real nice beat to listen to at night. just lay down and listen to the words. This is a very touching beat. 8/10
Second Verse
Once again you should fix your emotion. make you sound like you mean it more. and make sure we can understand every word your saying. I can tell you put some work into this song. and it shows. this is probably the best song from you. word 6/10
Quality
i'm pretty sure you used to have that scratchy ass quality before. but it got alot better. Do you use cool edit? or did someone master it for you? keep elevating you will be a good rapper i can see it. you elevated like whoa!. 8/10
overall i give this about a 6.8/10
this is probably the best track i've heard from you. i really like this especially from what i've heard from you in the past. keep it up famz