aiight famz. im listenin
[Intro]
The intro is good. if you didn't say you was a white rapper i wouldn't even know you was white. I understand the message your sayin in your intro. alot of white rappers feel that way. But keep doin your thang famz.
overall i give the intro 7/10
[Quality]
The quality is real nice famz. its improved alot from what i've heard from your last song. I could understand every word clearly. no pops or anything and it was clipped nicely. the hissing i couldn't hear at all. what kinda mic you use? this shit is nice.
overall i give the quality 8/10
[Beat]
The beat is nice. nice mellow song. another song i would sit down and listen to when im going to bed. the pianos were nice on this. Im feelin the maracca's or whatever you call them things. this beat fits your topic and flow perfectly.
overall i give the beat 7/10
Flow
The flow was nice. it rode the beat perfectly. the emotion was also nice on this i could tell you put your heart into this track. and it payed off. the flow is nice. i could hear everything you said perfectly. you didn't rush any words. and you stayed consistant through the whole song. good job
overall i give flow 7.9/10
Lyrics
Lyrics on this track was really deep. I could understand everything you were saying. and it was real touching and a real serious track. this song would be excellent for an intro for an album or something. This is an all around nice track
overall i give this track 7/10