Voted For: Apostrophe

Kon's fallen off so, when will this dude see...
that i'll smack this ass.. quicker then his avy's booty...
I Kill with verses.. && make you die with sentences..
cause Kon couldnt make the club jump..
....................................if he was shynes apprentice..
I've seen all your names around...............
&& i've known you've been a bitch from the start..
cause i dont need to be a retired oriole.. to rip kon apart..
Your Audio's are garbage.. for a laugh is the only reason i check it..
&& This battles over easy.. just how i like my breakfast..

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Thought his name was hidden...Till i looked in the crapper..
U winnin? please, everybody knos apostraphe's cum after..
This Kids pussy.......It's evident that kon own's this whore..
Only Time somebody's gonna "scream at you"
.............................Is when keyboards have vocal chords..
This faggets elevatin.......with his feet locked in shackles..
.Thought this fag was straight, Nope!, He's "adam's Apo"..
Apostraphe's a homo, Talented? Nope Just a waste of life..
You still couldn't get a "Holy",
..............................If you was bangin the preacher's wife..

EXPLANATIONS:

kon-Your verse was iight, you had some good wordplay and punches/personals...some things to look out for....try and come more creative with your verse..i wasnt thrilled reading your verse...i just thought it was pretty average.....good flow...overall 6/10

BEST LINES:This Kids pussy.......It's evident that kon own's this whore..
Only Time somebody's gonna "scream at you"
.............................Is when keyboards have vocal chords..

Apostrophe-Your verse was funny, all about laughs...kept me laughing the whole way...you had good wordplay...and goood punches/personals...not so hard hittin but deffinitley comical and appealing....overall 7/10

BestLines: && i've known you've been a bitch from the start..
cause i dont need to be a retired oriole.. to rip kon apart..



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