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Old 10-23-05, 07:46 PM   #25
Conceptions
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Voted For: Natural killa

Aii This Is What I Think

NK
this my 1st and worst line.....and I've already passed ya,cuz
the ghost i'm battling here.....is about mean as Casper was
...a little Fuuny But No Strong Punch...
ur always the last to buzz cos ya shit's always gon be worse,son
ya skills a "chip" on the 'ol block and ya verses "hertz" none
....Nice Wordplay....
so go get ya purse 'n run,ya got no advantage to sit through
cos 6 months ago,i sucked
..........and yet,I still managed to beat you!!!
...Weak Punch Aii PErsonal...
guarenteed....at the end of this,I'll have your pride stirred wit treason
& ya texas as whack the Rangers were this season..(text-as)
....NIce!...
not without reason...so don't think I'll have ya be the last to drown
cuz ur the only ghost I know that could neva elevate pass the ground
...Damn ...

Overall You Came and did ya thang I Think That you came out on top With your wordplay and a few punchez and really good personals So thats why your verse came out to be better than Ghost did so I had to give this one to you

Ghost
You a "Natural-Killa",but Yet if you Was To Shank Air You Couldnt even Threaten ( Mother-Nature )//
Too Bad Your Only Seen 4 dayz Of The Week,Like Da Re-Run Episodes Of -Frazier-//
....Weak...Too Worded..
Schoolin Me Burnin-da-Hatred,But Yet u Aint Changed,cuz u still couldnt rip me if u Bit Linez,-------------------
yet Copy-n-Paste It//
...WTF?...That Was Very Weak and Sloppy..
Im Back For the throne,only Difference kid is You Gone like Motherz With Adopted Children when they Grown//
Coudlnt Conect With Punches,If u Was Physically Swingin N Make CONTACT with the Microphone//
....Weak & Played...
U a Killa,But hey Shyt then i guess Im A Killa In Process of BEing Late For A Hit//
Cant Relate-to-my-shit,Couldnt "CUm" at me with "flow" if u were to Abbreviate With Ya CLIT//
....Aii...Better Buut Yet not Good...
You Couldnt Compare to Me,Of My mother Verbally and Visonly Proved you Were My Blood//
have Your Mind Going Balistic With The 'FLOW',like split DOME at da NEW ORLEANZ floodz//
....Better...Good...

Overall Man Your verse was worded way Wrong and Had To Much In One line and it threw the readin off and threw ya punchez off and it made you seem so simplistic and so weak and your concept that was used in your lines were sort of played but swayed off to teh side as if we wouldnt notice but Yeah man You didnt do good on this verse at all and I think that Nk took this battle

my v/ NK
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