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Old 10-23-05, 08:35 PM   #30
chip
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

wow.... neither of u came like expected........ both had okay pieces, from different perspectives of the topic.........voc. was on point for both, no real emotion from either of u........ basically for me, it came down to originality........ i'd have to give it to MC for the nice story.......

MC- overall 8.5/10
Paranoid- overall 8/10
vote went to MC bcuz of his story, and his rhyme scheme didn't seem as forced..........

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