Voted For: Mystic Chaos

Aii This Is What I Think

MC
I Think That Yours feel Off at One point but you Came correct and you also went Into the topic as a real topical writer should do and I feel that your concepts in the storyline were alot better than those of Mentalz So id give this battle to you

M
I Feel that You Shuould Try to stay on topic although you had a good Stroyline you seem to be off topic to me im sorry to say it but I think that you might need a little bit more training in the topical area of battling so im hopin that you try and do better in your next battle

-my v./ Mystic

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