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Old 10-24-05, 04:32 AM   #25
~Lady Fiya~
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IP:

Good collab kiddies...

I'm feeling the chorus.

Implicit:
Lyrically pretty decent throughout, flow-wise it was pretty good, a few spots where you held the last word a lil' long, makin the transition to the next statement sound immature.. not bad, presence pretty straight, feeling your emotion, and your last verse was way better, especially towards the end of the verse, you picked up..

Ike:
Your delivery and emotion is great for the track, lyrically I was feelin what you were sayin, flow-wise---- you keep gettin better and better as you keep recordin, as well as your presence, you mad confident and that's good.

Overall - I was feelin the concept of the track, the chorus was right on the head, and both of y'all held y'all own weight makin this a hot collab. I think this belong as one of the best tracks of October.

(sowwi I have to rush the feed somewhat, I'm a lil' sweepy)

But good job, and lemme know when y'all drop another track together.
9.7/10 for a collabo, just a fewwwwwwww minor mistakes...
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