Hmm...Beat Is Dope Ya FLow Is Dope In The First Verse seems to really b hyped up on this 1st verse like the delivery....good job

emotion is good,lyrics i like the hook if it is a hook lol doesnt stand out really you should put a chorus 5 voices harmony that would make it doper
2nd verse i like this a lot keep on the flow better emotion seem to still b hyped up lol..........werd @this its dope 8/10 Good Job Keep Up
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