intro is damn corny lol way too happy for me.. first verse flow is cool, ad-libs are WAY too loud they should be quieter than ur main vocals.... delivery n emotion is cool, lyrics ok, this beat is so corny is annoying me, really dnt like it intermental, better emotion than normal, delivery is gettin better still work to be done but elevation is evident, lyrics are ok... as a track on the whole, id not listen again, but concidering ur both still elevating and learning, its cool, elevation is evident from both

RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212209