Voted For: one mic

dawg im hurt you, you couldnt win this battle if text rappin was your virtue/
to much filler to search thru, this gonna be worst then when "john c." murked you/
you could stay on point but your raps will never be personal/
i will turn you inside out like body was reversible/


you gotta lotta potential,

fix up your structure and word stuff better.

VS

when it comes to spittin dope lines, man, you really bore me
you diggin yourself into a hole, but this aint a fictional story*
your unequipped for battlin you aint ready for action
you gon' learn your skills from me like i was Samuel Jackson*
lyrically rampant, keepin my game tite
how you gonna succeed in rap, when you cant even spell ya name right!*

meh, you elevated...

again need to reword and shit,

i still think you took this, for better wuality rather than quantity.

RTF IN SIG ASAP.

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