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Old 10-24-05, 03:42 PM   #11
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Voted For: Daubs

Daubs You Couldnt "Add Up" To Me If You was "One More Than A Billion"
Ill "Chop" You Up And Make You "Blend In" This Habitat Like "Chameleons"
5...decent...wuzn't feelin 1st line tho.
Daubs Punchez Are Like Men Takin "Pregnacy Test"...They Never Show
Will Daubs Beat Satan Spawn In A Battle?...The World Will Never Know
3...1st line wuz good...2nd sucked,honestly.
This Guy could Never Come Hot Even If It Was Stoves That He Rubs
Daubneys Gonna End up Gone So The Question Is.....Where's Daub
4...1st line wuz blah becuz hot lines are played and the 2nd line wuz ok..

Stanza's back again, why...he's not someone we miss
'so I aint doin drama..when ima rehearse this bitch
5...decent.
Wack shit, your nothin...apart from thick and feeble
Cos he thought RV was rooting for me..
..so he brought a tub of weedkill
6..good wordplay
After i beat him, fuck his excuses, the bitch emerges
Cause when i win..
..he the type of kid to blame it on keyed verses
3..ehh,this concept been done many times.

Ok..
Satan's spawn..
decent verse overall.Nothing spectacular.Didn't see any punch above average.U had some played shit..like hot lines..which have been done forever.And some flat out basic shit like the 2nd bar wit the whole will never know thingy.
Daubs..
hmm..ur structure is resemblant to JTR/Theory's in this one.Ur best bar wuz the middle bar with the rooting one.Only weak bar wuz the last one..cuz,well...it's a played out concept to say someone blames shit on keyed verses..But,you win.

Vote-Daubs
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