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Old 10-24-05, 03:44 PM   #6
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beat struck me as 90s immediately


not really feelin it...not a bad beat, jus don't see how it connects with ur lyrics/flow

ur vocals are hollow sounded, like they're mixed in a tunnel

ur flow is decent at best...kinda jerky

smooth it out


lyrics lackluster at best

u had a couple spots where the rhyme was pretty aiight...but nothing was too consistent


5.5/10 track

Elevate dawg


RTF pelase

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