WhoAreYou?
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daymn mayn this ish is still goin.....
k lemme say who i thought won on this one
i really wasn't feelin NK verse i saw everything i hate in text verses. you had forced wordplay, for example "so" and "sew" are not homonymns meaning they don't sound the same so shit like that didn't work. and the lines you extended didn't hit nowhere near hard enough to justify doing so. and overall your punches were generally weaker than daubs' IMO. even though you didn't really run out of steam i think you should have come harder intsead of coming consistenly mediocre. and i appreciate you did have some ok personals in there but the structure was basic and they just didn't hit hard enough....
daubs i thought you came a whole lot harder in this battle. you had more creativity in your punches and i was getting into your flow more. i thought you came with more intelligent wittier punches than NK although i wasn't feelin the grab and squeeze your throat opener because i thought you coulda come with something more original on that line just to keep things more consistent but other than that i don't think you really fell off. your punches were on point and i liked the wordplay, especially the part about Nat (natasha beddingfield) i thought that was amusing....
but anyway i personally thought daubs took this one
~peace~
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