vocals too loud...............get a pop filter.....

and work on mixing.....


presence...is ok at some points....sometimes you go away from the mic it seems like....

delivery is pretty good......

lyrics ok....

work on breath control too....you can hear where your taking tons of deep breaths....
and sometimes it seems like your about to run out of breath...

you got potential man...definitely....but there are bunch of lil in and out things you can work on.....

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