NOT BAD BU TYO COULD'VE RHYMED MORE AND DROPPPED A COULPES OF HIT LINES IN THERE ALSO LIKE THIS

even when trouble arrive this work double to surve cries at night and dies at the sight of tears leaking on his pillow being a weeping follow never solved anything

OK BUT NICE PIECE AND NICE IMAGETRY KEEP UP THE KGOOD WORK AND DON'T FORGET THEM RHYMES HOMEY I LEFTED AN EXAMPLE FOR REAL