Voted For: Drama Queen

drama queen- i really liked ur topical, it had a lot of emotion, n the concept wuz good... im likin how it fit the topic of mirrored worlds, the ending made the whole thing a lot deeper, i reread the whole thing after that n certain lines had completely different meanings after knowin wut the endin is... good vocab, maybe a bit excessive tho... overall its still great

dilligence- the writin isnt at all bad, but the topical didnt really match the topics, u say "mirrored world" at th end, but that doesnt make it a mirrored world... woulda been better if u'd made it more abstract, witout dates n stuff, n then sed that today's worl mirrors back then, or suttin like that... also would been better if the endin gave meanin to it, like dqs did... basically, if u had read it carefully (which i had) u'd already kno that it wuz civil rights era, cuz of the dates n historical references n stuff... not bad tho

v/ drama queen