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Old 10-24-05, 10:05 PM   #15
Shazz
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Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

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Take a little bit more time with your stuff..Seemed like to me , a bunch of quick rhymes and short lines. And breakfest? I so didn't get that part.... Sounded like shit to me lol... Your flow and structure was really good even though the flow was a little bit basic but the structure i like alot it went smooth with it. Overall nice job but i think he got it.


Kon.Tay.Juz-
I like the multies thats the first thing that was sick that i liked. Another thing was the flow that was pretty tight , structure was good easy to read and it blended in with the verse pretty good pretty good. Only Time somebody's gonna "scream at you"
..........Is when keyboards have vocal chords..Lol that was my favorite line of the verse shit was good , very good personals good job with this i said good enough times now.. Dope verse Word.

Done deal

V/Kon
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