I like this not a track I'd bump but I can see you lettin out on the beat quite a bit, I can picture you rappin faster on this but you still did pretty good, your flow is good and as is your delivery and emotion. the beat is meh but overall I enjoyed your lyrics and verse. so yup keep goin man, like I can't say shit that'd make you be better but I can say you that would make you feel good bout yourself so just keep at it man

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