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Old 10-25-05, 02:16 AM   #27
BiZzO
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Voted For: PreZidict

ok this battle was aiight... both had some good shit...

UF - your verse had some very played lines, that were unoriginal, it flowed well but in some parts it feel off and got hard to read, your punches were ok, even though u coulda made em hit alot harder...
you needa use more hard hittin personals than some wack shit about his audio, you also need to up your vocabulary a fair bit, you coulda used sum multis to make it flow a bit more..
i didnt reali have a favorite line or bar.. nothin realli stood out to me.. so elevate some more brah... no hate..

PreZ - you took advantage of the unlimited lines, and used that to bring out some good lines, although your verse was long it flowed well and only fell off in mabey 2 bars, so i liked ya flow, had some good vocabulary in there too.. but u needa up ur vocab too, your punches were alot more thought out and not as rushed, and you too need to use some hard personals.. that woulda made ya verse sick.. but i gotta give you this win because of all over a better verse...

Vote - PreZ.. no hate..