Im not feeling how you spit ...Not saying flow was whack or lyrics were whack because its not its actually nice..But i cant really decipher some of the words sounds like you rap with your mouth closed or somethin...BUT just open it up a lil bit if thats possible..i hope its not no deformality or some shit to where you cant open your mouth all the way if so then im sorry . um...it seems like you've eleved greatly tho good shit since the first audio yea u have..good luck in the future.