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Old 10-25-05, 03:44 PM   #17
Jay Royal
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From: Oulu,FIN
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Voted For: Chief

okay lets see........

ach:

ah 'cunt' is what this 'puss' portrays, invision my spits then gaze
upon my different ways, of 'eatin sheet' like ah 'vaginal page'!!! (sheet, chief..?)
nice flow.....nice opener
u bein hots a phase, that nobody on RV seems 2 care or praise
grafics look crazed, & he 'paid, water'...2 'secrete on his wage'! (woo woo woo)
flow is nice....but didnt really feeling the punch
scarecrow use ya brain, hurt agreed ull acknowledge da pain
pupils might strain, cuz ya text is ass-crack like sniffin propane
flow is still gd...but...nah
nah i wont stop its real talk, my shots hit son my aims real sharp
and u wont start, being a "crhyminal" cuz of a jersey u bought!
closer is iight

ur verse flowed well but ur punches didnt hit that hard...


chief:

Chief.vs Achilles, let’s begin, ding dong, Hip-Hop is crime and a gun is a song
Well if that’s the case, I guess I’ll leave “u” missing like if I did the “alphabet” wrong
nice opener.....
Who is he? Call him a “bootlegged CD” ’cause he’s about to get “burned and ripped”
He’s a geek with a twitch who needs to “le'go” of rapping and I ain’t talking ‘bout “bricks”
lol.....nicee...
You in permanent writers block, you ain’t beating me you see, ’cause I got the game on lock
This guy’s a tramp, closest he get’s to getting a “home” is being related to “Sherlock”
2nd line was dope...nice
This next punch is “PC” terms, you claim to be black but you whiter than the uniforms worn by nurses
Looks like I hurt the kid, have a new alias, so let’s all call him “giga”, why?, ’cause “giga” bytes verses
nice closer........

flow was nice...ur punches hit more hareder.....
personal was there.......

vote:SHIEF
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