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Old 10-25-05, 06:42 PM   #10
noname
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Literally harmless....................with your perpetual garbage
I'd be five times better than you...........................................
.................................................. ..if i took my skill n halved it

too many dots..seemed to self glorify..and as said before...the 3 line thingy ain't work good.And really...garbage/halved it...I don't see how you can make it rhyme..even accented heavily.

it hard to realize the line above are wack
No flow no votes I was thinking.............
............................damn was that a rap

1st line...hard to realize the line above is whack?Uhh..I think that compliments.It's sposed to be it AIN"T hard to realize.And the punch wuz damn basic..

v/Black Arts or Souljah or w/e...
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