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Old 10-25-05, 07:25 PM   #6
Daubs
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Voted For: Apostrophe

Wack verses with stupid punchlines have no chances of stopping me
This a dog fight, so ill put a paws to you like an apostrophe*
My bars are similar to S.A.T's.... You're too stupid to test one
Like having sex with the grim reaper... You're fucking with death son
My verses claim life, So now you're trying to feign death
I made my words 'play-right' so I'll have you exit 'stage-left'**

(Opener personal was sick, and those ^ were all decent, but you came played on too many bars...i mean a boo's/booze flip and a dope/overdose line, that shit killed it.)


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Dude Your Talents Gone.. Sorry To Say.. Your A Wreck..
&& yea you were the only 3 time topical champ..
......................................but dawg this is text..
Back In The Day You Could've Beaten Me... But I Know this is True..
When i started riding a bike.. i still hadnt fallen off as much as you..
My Punches Are Frightening.. After This Here Comes The Terror..
Dude Shares A 1 bedroom Apartment W/Bill Buckner..
...............................Proves he's got no room for error
Your Rhymes Are Cold Dun.. You've Been Told Son..
Your Jobs are like your win streaks.. you cant hold one
Apostrophe's On Top.. So Dude Just Stop The Hating..
&& I got Flow On Lock...................
But I'll Make Him Open Up After All These Combinations

(Fresh heavy verse here, lots of originality opener personal was sick)

Apo got this for more consistant punches and not coming played.

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