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Old 10-25-05, 09:29 PM   #15
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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ok structure you got thsi easy lol council whoa bars kid not paragraph form lol
personals tie neither fo u really had any arsens crew line was all that i saw ok line but up it on the personals
vocab i dont really give a fuckbut both need to work on that rhyme scheme really basic
ok best lines arsen your name play biting the crew name truth lol
council didnt really see any lines that i liked to be honest i think ud be a better audio head
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