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Old 10-25-05, 10:17 PM   #95
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Voted For: Daubs

NK:

ur a bitch...no lie....so only if I could..i'd strike ur balls 'n tease
cuz daubs,i raped a girl last night,and it wuz all forced...
.........just like your multis..........
^^ok opener not too great 4/10
the polls are tied wit u 'n teph,but ur sig says something different instead
like desperate salesman,daubs,you always tryna put falseness into our head
^^ehh decent meta thats it 4/10
better off,u dead...cos they all rootin for me..yet u the one pullin stems
cuz while trini lines are played....ur gonna make 40 lines full of them
^^alright 5/10
ur brain thicker than wool 'n flem..ur crew got us all barking 'n strife
cos a member of LL's in the pen
......so no wonder everyone's started to type...
^^ok 5/10
this shit's hardly even a fight...like ur mom's ass,i'm just left untouched
& ur passin to beg...cos whackness 'an egg..'n u got the nest in thrust
^^good shit 7/10
dressed in dust...ur rhymes are old news..'n yet u'd pay to hug that 'n kiss it
and i ain't talkin bout african surveys...when i say u love the blacklisting
^^dope 8/10
u bite styles 'n dickride vets..but i'll still leave ya jaw fructured at the end of this
cos really... I ain't trying to play doctor...but ur structure's like a mimesis
^^ok 5/10
don't try to make any lines on pre-writing..YOU made a bitch move,stallin bouts
cos take a look at bitch slapped...it took you 5 days to accept my call-out
^^no 2/10
i'm winnin wit small doubt cuz ur rhymes affectin none,it don't hurt
and you claim to bring sickness to rap....but infectin no one but the herbs
^^no 2/10
die from the gun unheard..you UK pussies,you all stay mellow with the beef
dickridin the vets so much....shit....it's almost as yellow as ya'll teeth
^^ok 6/10
say hello to defeat...fuckin pussy....better get ready to go through heat
must have missed a loop with the stitches..the way ur flow "SEW" weak
^^good meta ok punch 6/10
cappin this song..u rappin so long and u ain't groom anything that'd blow
ur forkin ur lame raps to everyone...but you still ain't spoon any of the hoes
^^ehh 3/10
there's no room for ur shows...ur a waste...but u lying on the laps too soon
pokin this girl..cuz ur a joke to the whole world...but you still won't rap with toon(tune)
^^ok meta 4/10
capped 'n strewn...u got no balls...a woman'd have to push-ya to measure
fire comes to u 'n u try to squash beef faster than butchers under pressure
^^ok but butcher lines are played 5/10
all comes as pleasure...shock u up..have u hawking up some tazers
but u blow RAYS with ur verses
..........and I'm not talking about lasers....
^^ok 5/10
I'ma stalk this hater 'n bruise hiz letters cos i seen newbs spit better 'n demure
and he's been here as long as some 'a the vets...but still considered an amatuer
^^no weak closer 2/10

Overall: 73/160 (46%)


Daubs:

Now you swear you gonna win this,it takes more to phase Daubs
But i am connecting with nature...like trees with chain-saws
^^good opener 7/10
Maybe I have one weak bar a verse, but this time my luck aint shut
But Natural Killa.....Shite...I already gone and fucked it up
^^lol humor bar 5/10
Natural kills-A...so "lphabet" is now missing its pressence
And your words flow well.......when your spittin on letters
^^ok 5/10
4,000 posts in a month, aint it time somebody found the outdoors
And my talent is a great find...but RV still hasn't found yours
^^no 2/10
Gonna kill us all, your killing yaself, RV is your fuckin life
& ya verse could emigrate to india...and still struggle findin spice
^^oo nice 8/10
Second place is where u be-heading...so take off the neck shield
And im eatin nat up...like porn shows featuring mrs beddingfield
^^ok set up punch was weak 4/10
NK thought literacy lessons included pickin up rubbish with glasses (litter i see)
But he's quick to take "it"..........like he was rushing mathmatics
^^ok 5/10
Talkin about school classes, why, this bitch was never clever to begin
I mean the only thing trini can count.........is on me takin the win
^^good bar 7/10
I aint talkin about chocolate when i say NK's bars are fillers
And a-lik on the mirror...is the only time trinis ever a killa
^^ok 4/10
Fuck, how is this the "final battle" when trini never even won one
And i know this wack cat aint NYC (nice) so erase where you come from
^^dope personal 9/10
Grab and squeeze ya throat il take away your breathing fool
& its not unbelievable but, ive seen eggs that get less beat than you
^^dope bar good consistency 7/10
Im leaving NK green and envious, like bread thats stale
And am not tossin coins when i say trini gives head 2 tails
^^ok bar 5/10
Hes dull to look at, like he were visiably impaired
& most of RV dont get your shit...the others just dont care
^^no 3/10
He looks like, smells of and acts like shit...but we already knew this
Because NK don't live by the sword......he just lives by the sewers
^^good bar 7/10
Killa aint got dope concepts,but the lad he steels em from does
And he could be a surgeon with his heart in hand...and still feel no love
^^dope 8/10
Its generic to say NK gets less claps than wack empty shows do
But i cant get too personal....cos none of RV even knows you
^^true 5/10
He's dumb so i told him to fuck learnin,he tried to hit books
Again im takin Trini out easily...like a hoe in a strip club
^^ehh 3/10
when we said natural was killin the flow, we meant a dead rhythm
I offered peace of mind,but trini had different ideas of head giving
^^oooh 7/10
You rappin text, and i aint talkin websites when i say i gotta soundclique *sound>uk slang for good
id search his house, and even if his fam were women...id still find dicks
^^no 1/10
Look, this never has been hasnt been here long, n he'salready past it
& girls hate on trini...cos posting on RV is the only time hes active
^^good closer 7/10

Overall: 107/200 (54%)

Gotta give this one to Daubs better punches and more consistent.


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