Okay beat selection was on point.....flow & delivery is very lloyd bankish....u tried to mask ya delivery's monotonenes wit slightly hyper dubs...same thing banks does....really in my opinion the beat is cray this song....u follow its rhythm nicely so wit a beat this strong you'll get by jus cuz the beat is ill but I'm being real wit u cuz this is something u gon submit on a demo....this aint got me jumping out my seat..cuz its good but it aint new....I feel like I dun heard it before.....lyrically u came VERY predictable u said everything any other average emcee woulda said over this beat...no twists in ya plot jus the same song.....dun get me wrong I aint hating cuz I dun hear dplenty of ya shit u aint posted an was feeling it but this was uninspired an unoriginal to me....really all I can say is try to put MORE OF YOU in ya music...alot of niggas get caught in writing shit thats currently selling becuz if another nigga is eating off that style thats obviously the style people want...naw son...BE YOU an you'll be good....this track jus didn't do it for me son...no hate.

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