okay typin as I listen.....ah'ight ok u shoulda opened harder....it opened weak an how u open a song is EVERYTHING...u gotts hook them from start...I'm goin thru motions as I listen to u..nothing really drawin me...flow has improved greatly thought...delivery is better but u lacked the emotion...hook was ah'ight wit better quality an mixing it woulda been nice.....implicit....damn son how old is u?.......u mad young sounding dude....this wasn't the song for u son...ya voice discredits you...flow wasn't bad....delivery really lacked emotion........ok 3rd verse....again man u gotta OPEN HARDER....u lsoing my attention from the jump....the plus was ya flow...ya flow has def got tons better but u lacking in delivery.....an delivery is what hooks the listener in.......overall this was an unpolished track wit good intentions an alot of potential but as is...no hate but its boring...nothing really jumps out at the listeners on this track....but I see what yall was trying to do an yall def on right path status u dun improved tons....implicit this the first time I'm hearing u.....u def need polishing..u gotta learn how to use ya voice better....no hate jus realness yall...not bad yall..stay up.....1

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