ah'ight...ok u opened good..but ya delivery is falling off quickly....the quality is bad..u got them "ssss' sound on ya s's....good pick on the jae millz beat tho..I used that shit WAYYYY back....lyrically I was feeling u...u stayed wit the topic all the way thru...flow was koo, a bit repetitve but koo.......biggest thing was ya quality an delivery even tho it seems the quality took away from ya delivery as well..cuz ya vocals vol would fade in & out....ya voice sounds diff....never hear dya that intense before.....it works for ya son...u should exploit that style alil more...overall this was ah'ight def below ya usual level, btu anyways stay up..keep experimenting....1

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